I LIKE THE PAGE. Well organized. The division between packages is clear. A couple of specifics:
- I’d have reworked up top so as to not decapitate the two people in the back in the lower teaser. That is really distracting!
- Nice work on the graphic, but… I like to run bar charts vertically because it’s easier for readers to see the differences when numbers are displayed as columns. Good work incorporating the photo and the graphic.
I really like the combination of the Antenna and the Kepler display faces. Two of my faves.
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