FROM ED: A good page here. Structure and spacing work fine. Additional points:
1. Nice work on the teasers. Pretty tame, but the photos are cropped and placed well.
2. Good lead photo…and I’m glad to see you’ve given it good size.
3. The subhead on the terror seems a bit overwritten–perhaps to help fill the space?
4. I’m not a fan of side captions (bottom right), but if I were going to do one here I’d have aligned the type to the top of the photo, rather than the bottom. Aligning it to the top pushes the negative space to the bottom right corner, where it doesn’t appear quite so “trapped.”
So, small points. But worth some mention.