HERE’S ANOTHER submission from Kristin, who sent a long a batch of three pages recently. I’m saving her third for another week.
Kristin sent no note particular to this page, so Ed will get right into his thoughts…following.
1. I like the idea of reversing the section flag into the background of the photo.
2. The round pullout is a nice touch.
3. Nice work on nestling “ACTING” into “out” in the headline.
4. The sprocket/filmstrip touch is a bit cliché. I’d drop it from my repertoire.
Overall, nicely done. A good job of handling the photos.